028: Contemptusemptus Mundi or “The Pre-emptive Comtemptive”

mundi contemptus doesn’t comfort
the suicide, whose selfish escort
just quits when life takes sorrow serious,
when now old age grows deleterious,
Hemingway was cowed when came threat of age
when neither his pluck nor nerve would engage
contemptus mundi hidden inside him,
but scorned weak skin, his youth subdivided
his fates: Brave men can face wan bone and brain;
but Ernest was cowed when he faced slow pain.

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For newcomers — a note on 50 @ 25:

Once upon a time, I read that the perfect age for writing quality poetry is twenty-three.  Apparently most of T.S. Elliot’s stuff came out then, the rest of his work being supposedly non-poetic. This resulted in 46 poems written at 23

These poems came out exponentially faster and faster before my 24th birthday on April 30th – and I had to write in genres spanning from epic ballads to limericks to get 46 in on time. I guess that means, for better or worse, that’s the best poetry I’ll ever write. Sad day.

Who was I kidding?

Milton was blind and oldoooooold—when he publishedParadise Regained. Emily Dickenson was dead when her stuff came out. My favorite stuff from T.S. Elliot came out after his conversion. So yeah, old age is good for poetry too. Look at Burns and Berry.

(Side note: the name “Berry Burns” sounds like a shady car salesman).

Will I keep up this twice-my-age regimen every few years? Who knows, but this year, here’s to 50 poems at 25 to be written exponentially faster until I turn 26 on April Thirtyish. I do it this the second time around as a way to say: “Here’s to living life well before it’s too late.”


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  1. Doberman

    Ernest Hemingway had electroshock therapy (ECT) at least twice prior to his suicide …so…there was a lot going on there. Not just the chronic pain that he had or fear of age. He was really very ill.

    1. lanceschaubert

      Yeah, I agree. See a fuller response below…

  2. sedula

    Hemingway…in at least two stints in Mayo clinic I believe for psych issues. Sometimes I wonder if some of the hard drinking guys (Hemingway, Richard Burton, Fitzgerald) were self medicating bi-polar as well as alcoholic? Certainly Burton in my opinion.

    I get your poem. I just probably would have chosen a different celebrity suicide to illustrate the point. Well, hmm…I guess the ones that I tend to think of are younger people. So, maybe old Ernest can take the rap. He was narcissistic indeed and probably wouldn’t even be the slightest bit put out by your poem.

    1. lanceschaubert

      I’m sure they were — in reality, I suppose we’re all self-medicating until our souls return to intimacy with… well… let’s just say their source. So yeah, bi-polar’s a great description of people flailing untethered between feigned happiness and unintelligible sorrow. Including me in high school…

      In truth, I’m not responding to Hemmingway the man but Hemmingway the mythology. People, men in particular, often cite his suicide as a source of courage — that he faced it because it was the last in a long line of actions for him to face. I think his stories resemble the opposite in his life — a struggle between courage and fear, and I think his mental illnesses at very least show him not as an example of courage. I’m not judging the suicide in this poem, I’m simply saying it’s not a courageous things in most instances, and certainly in the instance typically cited with Hemmingway.

      I like to think he’d like the poem. It might not be the best of poems, but I think it may have evoked his respect in later years, and if I achieved that, then I achieved my goal.

  3. Shannon Derning

    Not back home yet..but…only one “m” in Hemingway. I would want to know this if I didn’t.

    Pittsburgh is fun!

    1. lanceschaubert

      Thanks. Yeah, I should know it seeing as my “am reading” book is his complete short stories (see below \/ ). I was probably just in a rush, as usual. Why the rush? Couldn’t tell you. All I know is that Lance + caffeine = nuclear fusion

      In any case, thanks and I’m glad you’re enjoying Pitt.



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